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Title: On a hot summer night would you offer your throat to the beast
Pairing: Ohkura Tadayoshi/Nishikido Ryo
Rating: R
Warnings: Vampire frottage?
Disclaimer: Don't own them, or the Meatloaf song that I got the title from (I changed it a little though).
Summary: It's barely over 400 words, there's no way I can really summarize it. Just look at the pairing and the warning, that's how people choose what they want to read 75% of the time anyway.
A/N: Written in a MSN conversation with luna_truths, and then edited later. She claims this made her cry somehow, but I'm pretty sure that it was just because she's sick.I shouldn't have been writing this, but I did anyway, so enjoy! Constructive criticism is always welcome.


He gasped as the man’s teeth sunk into the flesh of his neck. Logically he knew that it should hurt, that he should be pushing the stranger away, but all he could do was hold that sinful mouth closer to him, fingers sliding into golden brown locks. He moaned as their hips pressed together; the waves of pleasure coursing through his veins. When the stranger pulled away to lick his bloody lips, he immediately followed; grabbing the lapels of the dress shirt to pull the man closer as he raised up unto the tips of his toes, eager to feel those delectable lips against his skin once more. A gasp escaped from his own parted lips when the stranger's hands landed on his hips, lifting him to sit on top of the table behind him, ignoring the dinner dishes that still covered the surface. He wrapped his legs around the narrow waist of the stranger and continued to grind against him as those full lips once again found his neck, lazily lapping at the blood that continued to flow from the punctures.

Large hands began exploring his body, pulling their heated forms closer still, their hardened lengths pressed together through the layers of clothes. The stranger pulled back to moan, low and long, desperately grinding against him. He Ran his hands up over the stranger’s broad shoulders and let his fingers card through the silken locks once more, guiding the full, blood stained lips back to his throat. He could feel the blood traveling through his veins as if it were laced with ecstasy as that familiar warmth began to settle in the pit of his stomach. Small gasps and groans fell from his lips as the stranger began sucking at his neck more ferociously; he could feel him growl against his abused skin, a deep melodic rumble. Sooner than he would have liked he felt himself losing all of his control, coming harder than he ever remembered coming before.

The stranger pulled back slowly, smacking his lips with the barest hint of a smirk. He tried to glare at the man through his lusty haze.

"You could have taken my pants off you know." he said breathlessly, "As amazing as that was I could have lived without having to do the laundry tonight."

The stranger leaned in and kissed him for the first time since he'd let him through the door. "I've got other plans for you tonight."

He eyed the stranger skeptically, "You aren't going to kill me are you? At least let me put on some clean pants before you do."

"I'm not going to kill you. You gave me a meal; I have to express my thanks for the food."

Comments

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luna_truths
Mar. 2nd, 2011 10:25 pm (UTC)
Yeah just claiming the spot because I've already read this damn thing but still felt the need to make it known that THIS is MINE.
rourenna
Mar. 2nd, 2011 10:31 pm (UTC)
*snort* Did you even read it after I edited it? You crazy girl. Now no more crying to me about vamp fics; you keep getting me to write shit that I never wanted to somehow, and it's a bad trend.
luna_truths
Mar. 2nd, 2011 10:40 pm (UTC)
....I haven't read it again yet. Hello. Stupid. You sent me over 187 pages worth of Nakamaru pictures. I am to distracted by his beauty that I can't make myself do anything else.

Its not my fault other people decided to write bad fic. I posted mine all innocent like and next thing I know there's a fuckload of bad fic around. I will cry if I want to! I can't control my emotions. Especially when I'm sick. But I can just bitch to you over MSN since you'll be leaving me this week anyway
rourenna
Mar. 2nd, 2011 11:12 pm (UTC)
Well it's not my fault that google image search keeps taking me to tumblr. That Ohkura pic was worth it though. And I still like "Fuck yeah wife-beaters" because it's full of muscle and I originally thought it was talking about DV and not clothing.....>.>

They can't possibly be THAT bad.Lol, you be an overly emotional bitch then, I'll let it slide since you're sick and all. I'll still have a computer next week; I just won't be on it as much and probably won't have messenger. You can still email me though, I'll be checking those everyday for sure.
luna_truths
Mar. 2nd, 2011 11:23 pm (UTC)
Yes. Ohkura was worth it. But again.. 187 pages of Nakamaru. LOL. You would like that. DV you weird girl.

...You don't know. Bad grammar hurts me okay. I am being an overly emotional bitch! Ah. So we will still have some contact at least. That's good. I can send you fic that way right? So you won't miss out?
rourenna
Mar. 3rd, 2011 12:05 am (UTC)
Haha, yeah, I would....>_>..........

No, I don't, I don't typically read vampire fics. *snorts* Yeah, because my grammar isn't all kinds of screwy or anything. We will, we will. You can, though I'll probably be reading fic on break. It'll just be either early morning or late night; my nephew will insist on watching JE PV's when he's awake.
luna_truths
Mar. 3rd, 2011 01:19 am (UTC)
...I am totally going to write you... a fucking one shot where Ryo gets teh shit beat out of him by Ohkura.. just so you get your damn DV out of your system. Just don't expect it until AFTER I get my Kamic.

See! Well.. Its easier with you for some reason. My brain automatically fixes everything you fuck up. So its fine. Yay! At least I'll be able to talk to you and send you little sneak peeks of my fic. Not like I don't do that all the fucking time though. I should really stop that. I always show you half the damn thing before its completed. OMG. That is so cute!
rourenna
Mar. 3rd, 2011 05:03 am (UTC)
*___* I will love that so fucking much! I will work on Kamic soon, I promise!

Lol, but then you add stuff in so it's like a new fic practically by the time you post it. It is. He can say Aiba and Arashi, and I believe I've heard him say Ohkura(though for reasons I'd rather not have to try to explain my brother and I refer to Ohkura as "the burger king" with each other, and my nephew can say that). I'm working on teaching him Yamapi, he's half way there. For some reason he won't learn Yoko though; it's sad really.
luna_truths
Mar. 4th, 2011 03:28 am (UTC)
Okay.. Now I would like to point out that I did read it over this time and yes. It still brought me to tears. Fuck you don't say a word I wrote you three damn oneshots in two days I'm so happy that you wrote this. I can't fully express the overflowing emotion that is skittering about inside my chest right now.

Ahhh... Really. This fic makes me want to get to work on my next chapter of Into The Darkness.. but I feel like shit so I think I'll put it off until like tomorrow or Saturday. You better be prepared to have a lot of emails from me. I miss you already and you haven't even left me yet! What am I going to do when you're gone? I'm already feeling so very lost.. ;_;
rourenna
Mar. 4th, 2011 03:39 am (UTC)
You seriously cried? Again? What the hell, woman?! Maybe you are menopausal after all. Anything for you, you know that. Who else would write me DV kitchen sex fic?

HAhaha! I will respond to all of those emails diligently! You know, I know you have other friends, you could always talk to them, I don't think they'd bite. It'll be worth the long hours of missing me; like I said, tell me the fetish, and I'll write the fic for you. Don't let me forget about that footjob fic, either. That shit is getting written eventually.
luna_truths
Mar. 4th, 2011 03:47 am (UTC)
;_______; Stop judging me. Its not my fault I went all menopausal at 20 years old. Now I have to rely on you to produce offspring for me. Ummm... Someone cooler than me? IDK. I kinda liked writing DV.. Damn you for causing me to like that shit.

You better! I might die without you. ...But none of my other friends are in the same timezone as you! They are barely online at the same time as me.. or when we are they can only be on for an hour or something.. WHAT AM I GONNA DO WITHOUT YOU!?! *Clings* Seriously.. I think you just ripped out my heart.. This shit sucks. But I hope you have a nice spring break.

Ohh.. I shall think of something for you to write.. and I believe I may have an idea right now actually.. Shall relay to you over MSN.
rourenna
Mar. 4th, 2011 03:55 am (UTC)
OI! Don't blame me! Blame Ryo for looking hot slapping women around, and for being such a damn masochist that he's just begging to be slapped around himself.

Ah....well....make new friends in better time-zones? Yeah, that's all I've got. You will just write epic amounts to fill up the time. Don't worry I'll document my break and make an epic post all about it for you. That way you will know it was worth the suffering.

MSN would be faster, but here's fine too, whichever you want. Also don't forget to give me the pairing you want with it.
luna_truths
Mar. 4th, 2011 04:00 am (UTC)
Yeah.. He did look awfully hot doing that. Now I wanna watch Last Friends again. Fuck. Where is that box set at.. I think its in a box somewhere.

...But but.. That won't help me not miss you when you're gone.. ;_; When are you coming back again? I'll have an epic amount of Akato and some more DV as a welcome home. Also expect lots of flail and tears when you come back.
rourenna
Mar. 4th, 2011 04:15 am (UTC)
You go do that, it'll bring about more fic, I'm sure.

I'll get back sometime next Sunday. The time depends on how early I feel like getting up to drive back up here, but it'll be in the afternoon at earliest (we're not allowed back in the dorms before noon).
fancyann1974
Mar. 3rd, 2011 11:48 pm (UTC)
very hot and sexy
what a extremely outstanding thanks for food
thank you so much for sharing
rourenna
Mar. 4th, 2011 02:45 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading and commenting, it's always appreciated! ^_^
lilly0
Mar. 4th, 2011 04:37 pm (UTC)
*g* In a strange way this here freaked me out and pulled me in xD
And I'm normally not much into vampire stories, but this here was somehow really interesting xD

How did you manage it to make it sound so good for those two???? xD


rourenna
Mar. 4th, 2011 05:03 pm (UTC)
Uhmmm....Is freaked you out and pulled you in a good thing?
I'm not really much for vampire stories either, but I'm glad this managed to be interesting.

I honestly don't know. They weren't even the ones I had in mind when I started typing and then suddenly they popped in my head as I went.

Thanks for reading and commenting!!!!! ^__^
lilly0
Mar. 4th, 2011 05:11 pm (UTC)
Don't worry... I meant it in a good way^^
I went like:WHAT are they doing... to: WOW!^^

rourenna
Mar. 4th, 2011 05:22 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! Well, thank you then, I guess.
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